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Process Analysis Rough Draft

Process Analysis Rough Draft

Q After reading over my feedback for your process analysis rough draft and reviewing the information in the Writing Skills Unit Materials folder, please rewrite your essay to address any weaknesses that either myself or you have identified. Please highlight any changes that you make and add a comment explaining why you made that change. Once you have fully revised your essay, you will resubmit here. The purpose of this assignment is to help you understand that writing is a cyclical process, and writers often have to go through multiple drafts before they settle on a version of their work that they are happy with. This will also help you grow your skills as a writer, as you learn to self-evaluate your own writing, as well as take criticism from readers and use it to make your writing stronger.

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Some foods are a cultural symbol and have their own authentic cultural style of eating it. The Japanese Sushi is one example, although it is not that we will be thrown out of the restaurant if we do not eat it the traditional way; but the correct way simply enhances the experience and at the same time acts as a cultural lesson (Rodgers). The Japanese cuisine has become very popular in the recent years all across the globe. Youngsters are all trying out the Japanese sushi and most of them are becoming its fans. To make the correct traditional sushi it also takes years of mastery and perfection, thus, eating sushi the correct way also shows respect to the chef, makes us indulge more into the taste and experience also acts as a valuable cultural lesson to cherish forever.